Years ago, I watched news coverage of a California wildfire on television and asked myself, "What would I take with me in a fire?" Of course, I had to up the ante, so I tossed in a little more tension. This was the resulting poem.
It's actually an amazing mental exercise: if all of your peeps and pets were safe, what belongings would you take with you? Set your own boundaries (car or carry, etc.) and answer the question yourself. Maybe the answer is your next poem.
The valley is on fire
and it comes as no surprise
to me. I grew fond of the dense
grainy sunset, and the ashes
on the porch were a welcome
sight. They helped me think.
But my eyelid still twitches
when I get the empty boxes from
the trunk
of my Chevy, and when the cat
scratches
her litter I freeze, sure
it is your tires crunching up the
gravel
driveway. I’m not a coward, but I know
my strengths. You are not among
them. So I pack first the things
for which I would burn — Mother’s
jewelry, the cat’s medicine, my
notebooks.
The wind picks up. Now I smell
the fur of those to small to
outrun
the quick snapping flames.
I lift the drawers
from the dresser, turning them
upside down and giving them a
shake
or two — not because they
need it, but because I need
the finality of a shake. You have
taught me well.
And when the litterbox
is stacked on the Samsonite in
the back seat
and my galoshes are wedged next
to the spare tire and my ten
favorite
books are tucked in with the
linen
and Nana’s typewriter presses
against
the picnic basket below the cat
and carrier
up front next to me, I’ll start
out of the valley, before the
fire reaches
what was always your home anyway.
- by Chris Fow Cohen
© Chris Fow Cohen. All rights reserved.
6 comments:
I like the strong imagery in this. I enjoyed reading it.
I like the strong imagery in this. I enjoyed reading it.
I like the strong imagery in this. I enjoyed reading it.
I like the strong imagery in this. I enjoyed reading it.
I like the strong imagery in this. I enjoyed reading it.
Thank you, Richard. It's one of my favorites of my collection.
Are you going to try your hand at writing a "fire" poem? I'd love to read it!
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